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Thanks very much for all the updates you've been making! I think you've managed to add information to almost every species we have listed! :) --[[User:FeralKitty|FeralKitty]] 23:17, 11 November 2006 (EST) | Thanks very much for all the updates you've been making! I think you've managed to add information to almost every species we have listed! :) --[[User:FeralKitty|FeralKitty]] 23:17, 11 November 2006 (EST) | ||
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| + | Regarding variants, a grammatically correct sentence would be an improvement. Currently, using "...changes its color to a ''color'' ''species''" is saying that you're changing the color to a color that is named after the species. Writing "''Doing this'' changes it to ''this color or pattern'' would make more sense; alternatively, "''Doing this'' changes the ''species'' to ''this color or pattern''. | ||
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I think it's better to leave * off the variants rows, for consistency's sake. Also, the species layout is 80% bulleted items already, so the more we can avoid additional bullets, the better :) Another tip is to just link the first occurrance of an item, and leave the other nearby occurrances unlinked. That way, a visitor isn't visually overwhelmed with too many link choices.
Thanks very much for all the updates you've been making! I think you've managed to add information to almost every species we have listed! :) --FeralKitty 23:17, 11 November 2006 (EST)
Regarding variants, a grammatically correct sentence would be an improvement. Currently, using "...changes its color to a color species" is saying that you're changing the color to a color that is named after the species. Writing "Doing this changes it to this color or pattern would make more sense; alternatively, "Doing this changes the species to this color or pattern.
