PinataIsland.info talk:Sandbox

Very nice write up, Spartan! That would make a great introduction to the Whirlm! --Jimmcq 02:39, 6 December 2006 (EST)

Oh my God... the page I just wrote on the talk page... was lost. Sigh, I'll be back tomorrow. Just know that I put this here not because of the Whirlm intro, but how this format would be applied to the rest of the species pages and I put it here to be critqued and improved. It's subject to change. All the questions I wrote on how I could be helped are gone so just tell me how to improve until tomorrow. And move this if nesscary. G'night! --Spartan 02:48, 6 December 2006 (EST)

So do I need any improvements? My goal wasn't to rehash what was on the page but to talk about each particular species but to describe it's behaviors and summarize what was on the page a bit. Should I summarize more or less? As I write more I will get better. I'll start writing these in a week. --Spartan 19:19, 6 December 2006 (EST)

I've cleaned it up a little bit, but overall I think you've got a good format! --Jimmcq 19:39, 6 December 2006 (EST)

All right, if nobody has anything else to add I'm going to copy and paste this page tomorrow. Please don't move this before then and add anything else. Also, Jim I'll be starting on some of the basic pinatas tomorrow.