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charlietheunicorn
05-06-2008, 04:13 PM
this is a life story of Marco Parybo and his brother, Polo Parybo.

charector sheet:

name:
age:
varient:
friend or foe:
text:
bio:
powers:

I will add charectors that use this sheet. p.s. the dad is blue and mom is pink.

Chapter 1, The twins

Mom was pacing around"When is storkos going to be here with our egg?" "Don't worry hon, it'll be here soon." Dad said in Pa Parybo, here's your egg."[/COLOR]Finnaly! I thought it would never get here. "Doesn't that egg look a little big for one pinata?" The egg made the big bounce, and out popped, twin parybos! "What! Twins!"
"I thought that was only possible in whirlms!"


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I need a charector before I start.
Pigxie
05-07-2008, 06:33 AM
that was kinda bad..... spelling and stuff

i'll add boris..... you know him,,,
charlietheunicorn
05-07-2008, 03:53 PM
I editid it, is that better?
cutekitty
05-07-2008, 09:25 PM
Cloud of course!!!
Bunnycomb Breeder
05-07-2008, 09:54 PM
Still needs more punctuation fixes, and that [/color] tag sticks out like a sore thumb. Just trying to help.
Pigxie
05-08-2008, 08:22 AM
do you now how to spell? no offense but it's character, no charetor

just trying to help,,
FeralKitty
05-08-2008, 03:26 PM
do you now how to spell? no offense but it's character, no charetor

just trying to help,,

Let's avoid making posts to correct another member's spelling mistakes. It's generally not productive, takes threads off topic, and occasionally is ironic.

Criticisms are best-suited for PMs.
charlietheunicorn
05-08-2008, 03:28 PM
I need some ideas for the next chapter.
Bunnycomb Breeder
05-08-2008, 04:39 PM
Tell what happens as they grow up. How did they start off? Where did they go to school? Where are they now today? Stuff like that.
charlietheunicorn
05-08-2008, 04:44 PM
"What should we name them?" she aked Pa. "How bought, Marco and Polo?" so that is how it began. Marco and Polo were never schooled, that explains alot. Marco come on, we finnaly got our own house, thancks to Boris. I just gat to say bye to ma and... Ma and Pa had left them. I'm coming.
THE END

that was cahpter two, how'd you like it? Boris had a small part. he'll be more in the rest.