View Full Version : Marty's adventures: The show-style RP.
04-20-2008, 02:11 PM
Since the RP thread I did didn't work out so well (Link in sig) because it's dropped a lot of pages and members are hardly contributing to it, I decided on a show-style format, ala The Perry and Plamingo show.
This has Marty going through adventures every episode, and by using a form, your characters can also appear in the episodes. Pleas note that I'll put characters in episodes as I see fit.
I already have the first episode idea planned, but if you have any other ideas for episodes, PM me. Episode ideas on the actual topic will be ignored.
I try to keep the action to a mid-PG level, so please make sure the idea isn't too, well, over PG.
Here's my character
Personality: Friendly and adventuros, but also indimidated if done right.
If you want to join, use this form.
I also approve of creativity, so if you would like to put in a character that is a diffrent pinata species that isn't in the game (E.G. the Candyroo), use this form
Animal species is based off:
What it looks like:
All right, you can submit characters please.
04-20-2008, 02:16 PM
Can you put in Franklin and Paulie? I have my usual two characters.
Personality: Fun-loving, happy
Other: She wears a daisy on her left ear, she is a pink variant with blue eyes, she is good friends with Marty, Paulie seems to have a crush on her, she is Freya's best friend, she sings very well and sings all the time.
Personality: Shy, timid
Other: She can't dance or lie (just like Franklin), she is an orange and pink variant, she seems to have a crush on Franklin and has a beautiful singing voice (but is afraid to admit both), she is Polly's best friend.
04-20-2008, 02:20 PM
Technically, the show characters are defaultly mine in this.
Oh, BTW Polly, you've still yet to respond on Luke's RP thread.
04-20-2008, 02:23 PM
I'm gonna join this.
Personality: Quiet, likes to think things through, always looks out for his friends.
Other: Wears a gold chain.
Text Colour: Dark Orchid
^ I put the text colour in just in case you needed it.
04-20-2008, 02:25 PM
Actually, the episodes are done like this
Marty went over there
Marty: That's good
QWERTY: Dialouge would be buched up
EXAMPLE ZONE OVER!!
04-20-2008, 02:31 PM
I feel the need to dish out an extra restriction.
There are some storylines I will accept and some that I won't. The ones I won't accept may be because I don't know how to fit it as a story, or because it could be too innapropriate. So please think while PMing me for storylines you would like acted out here.
04-20-2008, 02:35 PM
Ah, interesting! Now if only I could think of a story...
04-20-2008, 02:40 PM
All right. I'm starting the episodes now. But I can still accept character submissions. Remember, form is in first post.
Episode 1: The egg
It is a sunny day at a macaraccoon home. The macaraccoon (Marty) comes out and takes a deep breath.
Marty: Ah. What a wonderful day.
Marty then goes into the woods, looking around until he bumps into an egg.
Marty: Oooff! Hey. What's this?
Marty picks the egg up.
Marty: It seems pretty dirty. I can't tell what species it is.
Marty then starts walking home with the egg.
Marty: Might as well look after it.
While he is walking home, he didn't know the egg was left by a Fizzlybear that dropped it while walking home.
04-20-2008, 02:47 PM
Next half of Episode 1:
At home, Marty wrapped the egg in blankets and looked in the pinata encyclopedia.
Marty: There has to be some idea on what species it is.
The doorbell rings and it's Polly.
Polly: Hey there.
Marty: Come in Polly.
Polly comes in and walks next to Marty, noticing the egg.
Polly: What's with the egg?
Marty: I found it. So I'm looking after it.
Polly: Really? I don't know ab
Marty: I'll give you a snack if you don't finish that sentence.
Polly then gets herself a snack and sits down.
Polly: Marty? This isn't like you.
Marty: I know. It's just the fact I have to find out what the species is inside the egg.
Polly just shrugs and leaves. The egg was bouncing slowly, meaning it would hatch soon.
Episode 1 is to be continued
04-20-2008, 02:50 PM
Yay, curiosity! I wonder how this will end up.
04-20-2008, 02:58 PM
Episode 1 continues.
The next morning, Marty woke up and went in the main room, but found a suprise. Where the egg was is a sleeping Fizzlybear baby.
Marty: YIPE! It's a Fizzlybear baby?
Unfortuantly, the noise caused it to wake up and look at Marty. He crawled towards him and nuzzled him.
Marty: And it thinks I'm it's mommy.
The fizzlybear looked up at Marty and smiled. Marty picked it up and was about to walk out, but then felt a warm feeling. Instead, he went and got it some honey.
Marty: Well, it won't hurt to have him for a while
Episode 1 is continuing soon.
04-20-2008, 03:04 PM
Aw, that's so sweet of him!
04-20-2008, 03:06 PM
Episode 1 continues
After a while of fun (Think of it as a montage), Marty then picked the fizzlybear up and setted off.
Marty: Don't worry, I'll find your true mommy soon.
Then, they arrived at a cave. A fizzlybear came out and saw it's baby. Marty handed it over and left. But as he was leaving, the baby looked at Marty, tears coming out of his eyes.
Back at home, Marty was having a disscussion with Chris about he managed to do something amazing. Then, he heard a door knock.
Marty: I'll get it.
Marty answered the door, only to end up with the baby fizzlybear hugging him, crying.
Chris: What's wrong?
Baby: I want mommy.
Marty: But I left you with your true mother.
Baby: NO! He big scary creature. You mommy.
Marty bought the fizzlybear in and Chris took the baby. Marty sat down, sighed and laied back.
Marty: What have I gotten myself into?
Episode 1 to be concluded.
04-20-2008, 03:11 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwwww, that's so cute!
04-20-2008, 03:19 PM
Episode 1 concludes
Marty spent a lot of time trying to show that he isn't his real mother, but fails in some parts. Once, he tried flashcards and the baby kept choosing the Macaraccoon one. Then, after a lot of time, Marty walked back to the cave where the real mother was waiting.
Marty: Here's your kid.
Marty dropped the baby and looked at it, hoping it would go to the fizzlybear. It then walked near Marty, but then looked at the fizzlybear mother.
The fizzlybear baby ran back to its mother and nuzzled her. Marty smiled at this and walked back.
Marty: A problem solved.
Unfortuantly, as he was walking back, he saw Polly.
Polly shown the Macaraccoon baby in her arms.
Polly: I found an egg and it hatched into this, now it thinks I'm it's mommy.
Marty: Here I go again.
Episode 1 end.
04-20-2008, 03:28 PM
Heh, figures it would happen to Polly as well! Nice work!
04-20-2008, 03:31 PM
Kk. But I won't post the next episode until I get more comments on my episode.
04-20-2008, 03:35 PM
That should be soon.
04-20-2008, 03:40 PM
oh love this story can i join
looks:is pink with brown eyes with a daisy clip
other:is nice and kind hearted...
04-20-2008, 03:52 PM
Hmm... Still not enough comments yet.
04-20-2008, 03:54 PM
i love it!!! go on its torching me!!!!!!! i wanna know what happens next!!
04-20-2008, 03:59 PM
I finished Episode 1. I still need more comments from other members before I continue.
04-20-2008, 04:54 PM
Oh forget the number of comments, I'm going ahead and creating a second episode.
This one features a character that isn't on my character list, Mac Macaraccoon, a child Macaraccoon. This one also deals with a situation we've all gone through once in life.... Not THAT, I'm talking about Fear of Roller Coasters.
Episode 2: Helping a kid
It was a nice sunny day at the theme park. Marty was quite enjoying himself, along with Polly. The reason Polly came along is because Paulie had to go somewhere (Trying to hide from a party, though Polly doesn't know that.
Marty: Well, this has been a fun day
Polly: You said it.
They then came across a roller coaster called the Corkscrew. It would be hard to explain here, so try searching for Corkscrew POV on youtube.
Marty: Wow.. Very cool
Polly: Really? I'm not sure.
Marty: Don't worry, I'm not Paulie, but I'll ride with you.
Polly: (Sarcasm) That's great.
As they were walking up, a macaraccoon was sitting on a bench. Marty was curious and walked up to him.
Marty: Hey there. What's your name.
Mac: Mac. What's yours?
Mac: Thanks... Are you going to ride that scary thing?
Marty: It's a roller coaster. Nothing's wrong with it.
Mac: But I don't wanna ride a roller coaster.
Marty thought about it. He could help cure Mac's fears of roller coasters with his help.
Episode 2 continues soon.
04-20-2008, 05:12 PM
good, i like it dont forget about maddie JK!!! YOU DONT HAVE TOO, but that was really goood
04-20-2008, 05:39 PM
I liked it! I don't think I've ever had a fear of roller coasters, oh wait, I'm scared of the coasters my brother makes on RCT2 because they go REALLY fast and they crash!
04-20-2008, 05:42 PM
Operator error, I'm sure. After all, it was made to go fast and crash.
04-20-2008, 05:45 PM
Nah, he just likes to see people suffer and die! As do I! :twisted:
04-20-2008, 05:50 PM
Episode 2 continues
At Marty's house Mac was there. Marty asked Mac's parents if he could come over and they said yes. They were sitting down right now.
Mac: Ok then. Why did you want me to come here?
Marty: Because I'm going to cure your fear of coasters.
Mac: Umm... I don't think I want to.
Marty: Do you like parties?
Mac: Yeah. Why?
Marty: Riding a roller coaster is no diffrent than going to a party.
Mac: It isn't
They argued for a while, then stopped. Then Marty explained how roller coasters are good. After a while, he called Chris over to help. Mac got on Chris's back and held on.
Marty: Alright Chris. Now run.
Chris stared running, Mac holding tight on his back.
Marty: This is going to be a long day....
Episode 2 to be continued.
04-20-2008, 05:54 PM
04-20-2008, 05:57 PM
04-20-2008, 06:11 PM
Personality: extremely strong, brave
Other: Usally drives KITT
Animal species is based off: Chipmunk
What it looks like: a chipmunk
Other: Wears a red hoodie with a yellow A on it.
Personality: If you've watched Alvin and the Chipmunks, raise your hand!
04-20-2008, 07:40 PM
Description: A wild-card protection bodyguard
Personality: Nice, quiet, friendly, humorous,
04-20-2008, 10:33 PM
Can Sparks join?
Description: Appears like a normal dragumfly, but uses many fire based powers
Personality: Thinks everything through and cares for all things, be they bigger or smaller than him. But is always prepared for a good joke to break a slump
04-21-2008, 03:18 PM
OOP: Thanks, but to bearz unlimited, I never watched Knight Rider, so I can't include KITT. Also, KITT isn't reletive to the VP universe
Episode 2 continues
(This'll be short though)
After a brief montage of Marty trying to convince Mac that roller coasters are not scary, he (Marty) sat down. Mac was back with his parents
Marty: What good is it? There's no way to show that Roller coasters are not scary to this kid.
Marty then remembered something when he was with Paulie. Sometimes, to conquere a fear, you have to face it head on. Marty was suprised that even though Paulie said that, he still doesn't go to parties (Paulie). Marty then got up and went to the amusement park.
Marty: I think I know what to do now
Episode 2 to be concluded.
04-21-2008, 04:40 PM
OOC: Actually, KITT has been in most RPs I've joined, and he is basically a Mustang with special powers.
04-21-2008, 05:06 PM
OOP: Still, this is my story-style RP and to me, KITT isn't really relevent. I can do the super-fast Lamboringhi, but not KITT
04-29-2008, 04:43 PM
OOP: I'm dusting the cobwebs off this thread. Oh, a couple of things I need to say. First, I started a new RP. The link to it will be in my signature, when I get it on my signature. Now I have no more things to say, so let's continue.
Episode 2 concludes.
After a while of being in the theme park and Mac actually riding the roller coaster and not being scared of it, he was sitting near the beach.
Marty: Well, at least it's a nice afternoon.
He then laied back and slowly dozed off. Polly came to the beach and saw Marty sleeping. She just shrugged it and went to the beach edge to play in the water.
Episode 2 is abruptily finished
04-29-2008, 04:44 PM
arctic pretztail! is a white female pretztail that was raised by dragumflys.she is very jolly
04-29-2008, 04:47 PM
OOP: You need to use the character sheet provided or else I can't use those characters.
04-29-2008, 04:49 PM
jolly and optimistic
raised by dragumflys
04-29-2008, 04:51 PM
Alvin, simon and theodore
rockstars and mega popstars
really happy and funny
04-29-2008, 04:52 PM
OOP: Include the full Character sheet, including what the enty is (Name: *name here*). That is still slightly vauge. Also, I don't think that the characters from Alvin and the chipmunks (The actual characters) would work.
04-29-2008, 04:57 PM
personality:jolly and optimistic
other:raised by dragumflys,is the only white pretztail on the whole island
05-06-2008, 04:43 PM
I think you should keep going with these episodes!
05-06-2008, 04:44 PM
I'm on Writer's block for these episodes. Still, if anyone has ideas, PM me, DON'T post episode ideas in the topic
05-06-2008, 04:48 PM
could you add
Other:brothers with Polo. Is always joyful.
Other: Brothers with Marco. Is always depressed.
vBulletin® v3.7.2, Copyright ©2000-2013, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.