View Full Version : Mel the sour Mallowolf, aka dog crime boss
07-24-2007, 05:35 PM
Thought he'd be a perfect evil character
Here we go
Rain. That was all I could see for miles from my house. God, I HATE the rain! I have to deliver this sissy Salamango; cowering in a cage to my right; to the professor. My henchmen are sitting at the door on their guard, in case its family shows up.
"Whens this rain gonna stop, huh!?" I yelled, making the salamango and my goons shiver
"I'm bored, boss, tell us a story, pretty please?" "Fine, fine. If it'll make you guys be quiet, alright, here we go..." Their ears instantly perked up, tails wagging.
My existance, was just beggining, I was an egg, kept warm by my mother, Cynthia Mallowolf. Sitting in her red rocking chair beside the door, "I can't believe it, my first child.." Proclaimed Cynthia, sighing with content at the thought of her new child and cradling the egg. A sudden knock came from the door, "Errr... package delivery! That's it!" "Coming." Replied my mother. The door suddenly burst open, sending me;the egg; and my mother to the floor. She looked up, and shrieked, in the doorway was the professor himself, along with 2 sour macaracoons. "I'll take that, thankyou!" In a split second he snatched the egg "NOO! My baby!" She dashed towards him He laughed an evil laugh and snapped his finger "GERARARA!" Shrieked the Macaracoons and they grabbed her by the shoulders"NOOOOOO! PLEASE!" She cried, tears softly trickling down her cheeks "Macaracoons, break her, then collect her generous offerings to yours truly! BWAHAHAHAHA!" He ran, along with me in his arms, he then maliciously laughed as he heard her shrieks of pain. My life was to be changed; from a sissy citizen to an evil canine.
End of: chapter one - the beginning
Anyone can join his backstory,
This is Mel's theme:
07-24-2007, 05:50 PM
Cool, but shouldn't this be in the "The Garden" section? A mod might move it.
EDIT: Oh, and can I join with Mythic?
07-24-2007, 06:03 PM
Yeah, sorry, oh, and sure.
07-24-2007, 08:05 PM
"Well, well! A mallowolf egg, HA HA!" The professor yelled in his secret hideout. He suddenly stopped laughing, in his hands was the egg, now trembling forcefully in his hands. He set it on the ground and out hatched the white maned me, as a baby anyways. "A wildcard Mallowolf! I'm in luck!"
"Papa?" I replied "Yes, I am your father! Now give all of your candy to me, son." "Sure, sure, papa!" I then broke my leg and took all my candy and gave it to my 'father' "BWAHAHAHAHA!" He laughed "Awoooobwahaha!" I howled back. "Hehe! Now , son, eat this SPECIAL candy, he!" He handed me a strange candy, red with black spirals. I took it from his hands and swallowed it in one gulp. "Gwaaaah...... ohhhhh...." "Yes, yes!" Professer then gleely smiled "GWAAAAH!" I then started to go crazy "GWAAH!" I yelled, then, I went into my adult cocoon, but instead of a sky blue color it was dark red with black stripes "Yes..." He chuckled. I hatched from my cocoon, feeling, tough, for the first time. "Where am I?" I looked at pester, gave a grin then kneeled "Hello, boss! I shall dos whatevs you sez, kay?" "YES!" he replied evily.
Little did they know that they were being watched...
07-24-2007, 08:22 PM
"A very good start for another villian...Nice!"
Mel...That beginning reminds me of something...
*Dragonknight collects its thoughts...*
Oh yeah! That was nice, too! HAHA!!:D
"Would it be nice if I join the backstory?"
Huh?...Well, if that's ok with Pinata...or Mel...
07-24-2007, 08:27 PM
This story sounds really good.
07-24-2007, 08:38 PM
Thanks very much people!
07-24-2007, 08:49 PM
Umm...Reid...doesn't it bother you that we are under the presence of...the Dark One...?
"A Dark One? Pinata? I don't think so..."
Hmm...*Dragonknight251 looks fiercly at Pinata...*
07-24-2007, 09:16 PM
I just need bios
07-24-2007, 09:35 PM
Not the best I could do though...
07-24-2007, 09:53 PM
Cool Pic, Pinata!
Ok, bios data...let's see...*Clears throat*
Description: A pinata packed with a powerful tail. Quick-thinking and High Speed stats, this pinata crosses every obstacle in his way.
There! Data in!
07-24-2007, 10:12 PM
I could make you a custom image of Mythic... that is if you like, Pinatamaster.
EDIT: Oh yeah, I forgot, the bio.
Description: A Mallowolf who always wanted revenge on his little brother, Torture who is a sour, for eliminating his family except for him. His dream is to defeat Torture and gain revenge for the destruction of his family.
07-24-2007, 11:46 PM
At the entrance a young, blue pretztail looked in awe. "Now listen!" Said Pester "You are to hunt me a pinata today." I nodded in agreement "To help you, I have created some goons for you" He hit a button which opened a door, 6 sour mallowolves fell to the floor "Greeh..." Professor and I said at the same time, both covering our faces with our hands. "Idiots!" We both yelled. I looked at Pester and smiled, "We's got similarities Professor. Now, your lucky pinata is..." "I was thinking of a Pretztail, perhaps..." "AAAH!" Squealed the spy. "Hey!" I grabbed the spy "Gotcha!" I yelled. In my hand was the wrist of a young Blue pretztail, squirming for its life "Well professor, heres the catch of da day boss!" "Excellent!" "NO!!!" Screamed the Pretztail "Whats yer name bub?"
"R-Reid..." said the shaken fox. A sudden yell came from the door "LEAVE HIM ALONE!" The growl in his voice sounded familiar...
07-24-2007, 11:50 PM
Want me to make an Image of Mythic so you know what he looks like?
07-24-2007, 11:53 PM
Sure, I'll make pictures for some parts of the story
07-24-2007, 11:54 PM
Like a picture storybook
07-25-2007, 01:37 AM
"Another Mallowolf, eh?" I yelled baring my teeth and foaming at the mouth.
End of chapter one!
07-25-2007, 01:46 AM
Me = Can't wait for Chapter 2
07-25-2007, 03:00 AM
Sorry, it will have to be after I sleep, YAWN
07-25-2007, 03:02 AM
Me = hopes I can stay up all night
07-25-2007, 03:57 AM
I think you'd be great playing Pester in the VP RP forum, and Hudson's gotten to think that he's invincible with no villains around.:)
07-25-2007, 11:29 AM
The roleplaying god has spoken!
07-25-2007, 11:50 AM
A VP RP User playing Professor Pester? Wow...
07-25-2007, 12:26 PM
Yay! I'd Love Too!
07-25-2007, 05:48 PM
Chapter 2 - part 1
"Names Mythic, pal!" Yelled this particularly green mallowolf
"Gaah!" The pretztail tore out of my grasp and ran to the side of the mallowolf, "JERK" Was all that came out of his mouth.
"Hmmph!" Grumbled pester "Youz guyz leave, now!" I roared, making both of them flinch for a second or two. "Yes, bettah run or beat up you get!" Replied a goon. They ran for the hills "You will be stopped by the pinata knights when we tell them you're here!" "Youz wont tell em!" I took out a remote control and pressed its button, a net engulfed the two. "Youz leaving never!"
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