A poem about Viva Pinata, the show.

[Paulina Pretztail]

I wrote this poem about my favorite show, Viva Pinata, whom I lost the same month that I lost my DeviantArt account. Double whammy.

The 25th of October,
a day I'll always remember.
no words can be spoken,
to mend a heart that is broken.
my house is no longer a home.

oh, but my sadness is deep
I bravely, courageously went to sleep
no more fun on Saturdays,
my love lives for it always.
I've got images of Fergy and Paulie.

Now drowned are my fears,
by oceans of tears
and long I will miss
the colorful pinatas.

[hey_its_me]

thats the BEST poem i heard about viva pinata!!!!!

heres mine:

Viva pinata was so great
but now its a sad fate
with pretztails and chewnicorns
and prickly thorns
and pester and ruffians and sours
i used to watch this for hours
now im like a horstachio thats blue
cause know im FEELING blue!!

[Paulina Pretztail]

Thanks for the feedback!

[charlietheunicorn]

Awww.

I feel ya....

[Amaroq]

I wish people had posted vids on the wiki, then we could watch them forever.

[Paulina Pretztail]

I wish people had posted vids on the wiki, then we could watch them forever.

Be careful what you wish for, you might recieve it... :)

[Piero Pretztail]

I've made up a long poem(quite funny)for all VP fans.The title of my poem is called 'Fergy Fudgehog And The Fourheads's Jades'.

I walked inside a cave
and found a lone fourheads
The fourheads are sleeping
beside a pile of jades

I walked outside the cave
to ride my trusty steed
I said "run like the wind!"
He ran at blinding speed

I wanted to steal the jades
but I don't have a weapon
So we traveled to my house
to get my flaming baton

I also took a jacket
It's made from cocoadile skin
I like to wear this jacket
because it makes me look thin

We traveled back to the cave
and I got myself prepared
I slayed the fourheads with ease
Too bad it's life's not spared

I took the pile of jades
They're shaped like Cecil's tear
We got ourselves back home
Our adventure ends here

[reklaw_vahn]

It was a nice attempt, and the story was interesting, but there are flaws in the structure of your poem.Typically, if you are going to have a narrative like story, you want every other line to rhyme, and if not you want to have a hidden meaning, otherwise it is just an odd short story. But still, it is the first attempt at a VP poem so nice try again.

[Piero Pretztail]

Thx for the comment reklaw.I know my poem was "badly" made cuz I'm not so good at making poems but I do lots of good humors every once in a while.Anyway,I made that poem cuz I thought about Fergy having a "second" adventure(after he cowardly fought a dragonache in the episode 'royal visit') which is about fourheads.

[Piero Pretztail]

Here's my poem about High Plains Drafter.I even made myself a short song about this in western theme!

My name is EL Sketcho
and I draw caricatures.
My art skills are way
beyond the amateurs.

I traveled to a bar
with my trusty horstachio.
He's faster than the wind
and his name is Tornado.

Tornado left me alone
to go to the bookstore.
I got into the bar
with my paws on the door.

I looked at the crowd
and they looked back at me.
They must be wondering,
"who or what is he?"

I got myself a seat
and I drank some beverage.
While I started drinking,
I was filled with cowboy rage.

After I've stopped drinking,
someone talked to me.
I talk back through a sketch
that scares and make him flee.

All the other cowboys
start to run away.
I got to make sure
that no one's in my way.

I even scared a sheriff
who talks a lot.
But I managed to
shut him up in just one shot.